FINAL ESSAY

My final essay after peer & faculty review is as follow:

WHO AM I? It is very easy to say something about others and even pass one’s comments on their activities, good or bad. But it is very difficult to say anything about oneself. I find myself to be tiny part of this entire world that is filled with the human beings around. I am kind, caring, courageous, etc.. Though, it is quite hard to write about youself yet I have tried my best to express all about myself.

I am sweet, but don’t have much confidence on myself sometimes. I don’t usually participate in much extra curriculums as I am a shy person even though I am trying to change myself, I am failing. It take me long time to make friends as I prefer being alone rather than being groups but who doesn’t like to make friends? Because of me being shy and reserved it has become hard for me to talk to anyone, I think that they will be judgemental. But not everyone is what I think they will. There are good as well as bad (attitude) ones. But once I make friends and get close to them then I am very talkative person.

It takes courage to say bad qualities about oneself. There are some bad qualities that I am trying to change from very long time. I am bursting balloon. It means that I can get angry anywhere at any point of time even for no reasons. I am always in confusion. I argue a lot & lots more.

But as we all know a person who has bad qualities definitely have good qualities. If I know that I m wrong, then I don’t hesitate to accept it. If I know that someone’s in trouble, I don’t hesitate to help them. I am sweet in nature. But, I am a rainbow. It means that I have several emotions at the same time.

I always wanted to pursue fashion designing. I wanted to make my parents & my family proud and do something for them. They are doing too much for me and I will be very happy if I do even something little which will make them happy.My father is a buisness man who knows how to love his profession with passion & dedication, while my mother is a house wife. We are 2 sisters among which I am the eldest one. I am loved & cared upon my younger sister. I am a student of college & my younger sister is student of school studying in 2nd standard.I have always learnt to be passionate about my work from my parents. They are my mentor, role model and what not.

My parents always supported me no matter what, even when I disappointed them. They never compared me with anyone instead taught me that whatever you do, should satisfy you and not others. And most importantly they never demotivated me.

Therefore, writing about myself, I am here to express myself that what I see, what I experience & what I plan for my life is the total manifestation of what I do today. I am with a happy, focused, hardworking family. That is definitely the greatest blessing of God for me.

ANANYA GOLCHA, FY-G, FACULTY NAME: MALVIKA MAHIDHAR.

WEEK – 9